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CONTEXT

Clip name: THE LAST ADDER

Clip Duration: 1:44 

Context: Experiment/ Film Noir

 

This film was designed to be similar to that of a film noir which means the criteria for this film is oneiric, strange, erotic, ambivalent, and cruel, my role in this piece was the screenplay writer and the editor however I would wish to be assessed as the screenplay writer. This was an experiment because I have never written screenplay before.

 

I enquire to achieve a replica or follow the definition of film noir and implicate it into my screenplay to make it Oneiric, strange, erotic, ambivalent, and cruel. One of the main factors in making a film noir is having a voice over which sounds very scripted which was one of the hardest aspects to achieve in this screenplay because you need to be very poetic and creative. I aspired to create a voice over that sounded along the same as sin city, the crime thriller directed by Frank Miller, Robert Rodriguez and Quentin Tarantino.

 

I mainly focused on pre-production as I was the screenplay writer, this screenplay was not aimed to create something new and unique but rather creatively follow the film Noir description and be able to experiment with the iconography, script, sound and dialogue in the limits of the genre. The films that I was most influenced by would be Sin city and Double Indemnity which was directed by Billy Wilder.

 

The problems I encountered whilst writing this screenplay was that we were having trouble with location, finding actors (who could act well), and weather as there was a typhoon around the time we were filming so we had to be very efficient with time management. We solved the actors issue by branching out into students who took different courses such as the B-TEC diploma and we managed create an outdoor set where we were able to control the lighting at the same time.

 

I think if critically analyze my role as a screenplay writer in this film I believe that I did quite well as was able to follow the definition of film Noir, however some of the major problems I have not resolved in this would most certainly be that my script isn’t very long page wise. In terms of collaboration with the cinematographer I think I was able to communicate very effectively with my partner/ cinematographer  

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Clip Name: Do Not Fight The Silent

Clip Duration: 3:10 

Clip Context: Experimental Editing 

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This is a complete piece of film that took several weeks to make and is about a teenage boy whose mother has passed away and struggles to get along with his new step mother, it is a teenage drama/ thriller What I aimed to achieve in this piece was to demonstrate a combination of formalistic and continuous editing effectively. Such as Sean Penn’s ‘Into the wild’ edited by Jay Cassidy. The inspiration behind this intention would be the death scene of the main character Christopher McCandless where Cassidy was able to combine the use of formalistic editing to convey the emotions of the character however he used continuous to create characterization. By using this technique in my short film I aimed to convey the stress and tension between two characters using montage editing, jump cuts yet still be able to create a story and develop characters through continuous editing. The reason I was inspired by ‘Into the Wild’ was because this film unlike most Hollywood films uses formalist editing for the use of conveying emotion instead of emphasizing action which I thought would be a good example to follow especially when trying to convey the conflicting life of the teenage boy in this film.

 

My role as the editor meant that I had to work very closely and cooperatively with the cinematographer in order for both of us to create a substantial piece of film that was creative and challenging. As the editor, I had to annotate screenplay along with the cinematographer and list match cuts, L cuts, J cuts and jump cuts, this would have to depend on the action of the character, the plot, if the scene is suitable to build tension and finally what we want to imply about the characters. In terms of actual production, I had to inform the cinematographer for certain shots involving certain aspects such as match cuts and jump cuts, and how long each shot should be. Most of the workload involved post productions where I ran into issues such as time management and particular shots however they were fixed by re-filming and planning and making space to edit.

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I would certainly say that I have gained a lot of experience during this project mainly involving editing techniques, I felt that I put a large amount of time into editing and put an even larger amount of effort to fix mistakes and learn from them. I think that I was able to demonstrate effectively the use of formalistic and continuous editing and use this to create certain conventions such as tension and stress. I would say that the scenes that had the largest impact on my style of editing in Sean Penn’s ‘into the wild’ would be the final. I found that the formalistic style of editing suited the final scenes and moments of Christopher McCandless and that it was a very expressive, empowering and emotional, which is something I wanted to introduce in my short film. This formalist editing takes place is during the mental breakdown. I think that what I would need to do better would be to always find a way to add a deeper implication into the film and a great example of this would be Alfred Hitchcock’s work, every object or cut or particular edit in his films such as psycho are always there for a reason and I think that if I could take this and use it to improve the editing it would look a lot better in terms of understanding. Such as the scene where the father kills the step mother, I found that it could be challenging to understand that the father is being controlled, yet perhaps if I added a cut of a close up to the cricket bat that he murders his wife with it would have a lot more clarity in terms of story.

 

Sources

Into the wild – Sean Penn

Psycho – Alfred Hitchcock

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Clip name: Food Fight

Clip Duration:

Context: Practice Piece

 

This film is a Comedy Chase scene that took around a month to produce and is about two friends who get in a fight over sharing food. In this film I was inspired by the works of the German cinematographer Frank Griebe famous for his role of cinematographer in ‘Run Lola Run’ as well as the works of Richard Greatrex in conveying comedy in the film Run Fat boy run. My aims as the cinematographer in this task of creating a chase scene were to imitate the unique shot movements in ‘Run Lola Run‘  and to try new camera techniques involving focus and zoom to create a comedic element to this film. Many of the camera movements, angles and movements were designed to be very similar to Frank Griebe’s work such as the chase scenes in Run Lola Run were depth in shots are used along with fast camera movements and smooth transitions. My filmmaker intentions are not soley based on a certain scene in ‘Run Lola run’ but rather the entire film a there are three separate chase scenes thought the 90 minute duration of the film. One of the reasons I wanted to focus on a comedic piece is that I find in general that it is very difficult to create comedy as it requires very certain shot types and movements which I would find challenging such as filming hand held, quick zooms, extreme close ups and changing of pace throughout the film.

 

For the role of a cinematographer I had to communicate and co-operate with the editor as well like any film production to create results. During pre-production I would annotate screenplay, create shot lists and organise equipment. During filming I would go through a routine of looking for the best lighting, trying to keep moderate exposure, look for depth and composition in shots and work a lot with change of focus whilst filming. After I would work with the editor to pick out the best of these shots to work with and pay attention to colour, lighting and shot movement. Some major issues that I encountered were changing focus effectively as it involve multitasking and precision. I solved this by re taking shot constantly. Another issue was using film equipment such as shoulder mounts which can be even worse than hand held if used wrong. I fixed this issue by adding extra weight to the back of the shoulder mount such as another person putting pressure on the weight at the back and the result was smooth stable movement in certain shots.

 

I feel that I managed to succeed in my particular role. I was able to effectively execute a wide range of shots that I found challenging and add a comedic element through some of these shots for example quick zooms and change of focus. However I would say that to improve and to perhaps allow this short film to resemble Frank Griebs cinematography in ‘Run Lola Run’ to a greater extent, I would need to film more shots and have a shorter duration for each individual shot during the chase scene of the short film. However I think I demonstrated a great amount of creative ambition in this piece through my cinematography and that the challenge to make this film similar to the work of ‘Run Lola Run’ and add comedy to the plot was fulfilled. As well as this I was able to gain experience in learning about cameras such as aperture, ISO and exposure. 

 

Sources:

Run Lola Run – Tom Tyker

 

Run Fat Boy Run – David Shwimmer

 

NY Times review of Run Lola Run - https://archive.nytimes.com/www.nytimes.com/library/film/032699lola-film-review.html

 

Roger Ebert Review of Run Lola Run - https://www.rogerebert.com/reviews/run-lola-run-1999

COMPARATIVE STUDY

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